It was 6 a.m of morning.
Avantikka was at her mom’s home during summer vacations of her kids.
Avantikka is an hardworking designer who runs a boutique and is very well known in town for her own work.
She hardly visits her mom’s house as she gets bulks of orders to complete.
She designs very well wedding lehngas of brides in Royal style representing Rajasthani culture.
Her sewing creativity was the bread and butter of her family.
After her marriage it was for the first time that she stayed away for more than a week at her own house.
She was enjoying it very much and this visit was like recollecting all memories of childhood for her.
She woke up early that day and her sister too woke up early alongwith her because they were habitual to waking up early as they were responsible mummies who managed their “house” on their own.
But unlike other days they did not have to rush to kitchen and prepare lunch box for kids, they were free so their brother asked them
Why not go go for a trip again like wise we used to go during childhood.?
Smile cheered on their face but they both were shy to say yes as they forgot to enjoy life, but then Raju their brother got a bike.
They both joined him on the same bike.
It was after years that the three siblings went on a early morning ride on bike to other side of the village.
They were happily enjoying the journey, singing songs.
Meanwhile what happens is that the two ladies fall from the bike,
One girl roll five to six times and her head get a deep wound while other lady gets her both knees broken, and wounds near eyes, ankles, face and scratches everywhere .
It all happened in a second.
Raju was still droving bike as he was unaware of their fall but he feels that why the bike got free all of a sudden and then realizes his sisters are missing.
He stops the bike and look back and than see that his both sister are lying on road crying in pain and injured.
He notices that a tall man of 6.5″ appears there all of a sudden and starts showing sympathy to the women.
The ladies were in trouble and they could not realize how they both fallen.
That strange man wanted to tell that its just an accident.
His brother searched here and there for help.
Due to protesting by the sisters, Raju avoid taking help of that man.
Another bike comes there and he ask them for help, they immediately take both ladies to hospital and his brother notices that in a second that strange man was disappeared.
Later after days it was enquired that
That road was the road of death and that strange man was a ghost who once lost his life on this road.
So from from that time whoever passes on that road he kills those ladies as he see the glimpse of his wife who ‘betrayed’ him living alone on that accident.
People say that he was killed by his wife knowingly because he torchured her so one day tired of everything her wife decided to kill him and then she took him on a ride and then left him in a break failed car and he died.
And her wife was jailed forever and died in jail at her old age.
(I was all surprised at this but then I could not ignore this because this happened with people who stayed in my neighbouring house )
P.S – The guest mystery will always be a mystery .
I love a good scary story!!
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Really Scary, D! Hugs!
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Creepy.
But glad that the two girls didn’t get themselves killed. Though it was strange that the brother didn’t notice his sisters fall off. Didn’t the two girls scream?
@theerailivedin
The Era I Lived In
They were unconscious .
I liked the overall story.. A sudden change of scenario on the road.. 🙂
But i felt a little re work is needed here and there. I got a feeling that you typed this in a hurry when i read it.
Sorry if i have offended you.. take care..
Yes yes
It is needed
Will work on it and update.
Scary story! Good I didn’t read this at night, or else I would have been scared to even go to sleep properly 😀
And that brother must have been like me. He didn’t even realise that his sisters had fallen off the bike. I don’t even realise when people have stopped walking with me 😛
Haha
Lost in one’s own world.
Hahaha, excellent Midnight Post…though i believe its only a piece of friction 😀 .Loved ot though:)
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Non fiction 😮
Hehehe, that was creepy! What an absent-minded brother! Poor girls!
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That’s a scary story! What an absent-minder brother, I say!!
Hehe yes
Loved reading it but the ghost in the story was a twist. Thanks for sharing.
@2richajindal
http://richajindal.com/good-life/
Thank you
Good story. This reminds me of my own accidents where my pa and me was riding to my examination center although i was hurt the people who did that help us alot and finally with that pain kill injection, i was able to give my exam and even score well in that paper. I guess Raju didn’t get proper help and due to excess bleeding the ladies died. As far as ghost is concerned, no doubt he could be but mostly it’s hallucinations. Wish people start helping the injured ones to save the lives.
Omg .
Injured and than gave exams .
You are inspirational
No one helped, because that was empty road.
Oh.. Yes and you know even nurse said you won’t be able write your exam. But i did and scored highest in that paper this incident dated 2 yrs back only and when i look back i think if i missed standing up that time i would have never been able to stand up again. Thanks 🙂
That’s the spirit !
That is creepy~~ 🙁
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Oh,God! Is it really a true story or just a scary mystery?? But, very well written. I was lost and thinking what’s going to happen next? Keep writing!! 🙂
@bloggerabhi1 from
StyleBurp
True .
Happens in village side .
Thanks
Scary post